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OBD Convo #27: The Show Must go on!

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Bruh, reading this chapter... I have no fucking idea what's even happening.
It's literally an entire order of events is out of order because Mastar really wanted to put in a huge ass action sequence then just loredumped the fuck out of us and then basically have the MC and Mentor do their schtick when it should have been done first for maximum impact to what happened previously.

It really does feel like Mastar knows how to write but he does not know how to pace or do scene structure.
 
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