Yeah, that's missing a few points there like in the battle against Oberon-Vortigern, if Mash is on the field alongside Artoria Avalon for atleast 2 Turns, she will be turned into Super Mash again which fights with what Round of Avalon actually does(Temporarily grants people a name from the KoTR and the benefits that come with it like Morgan does).
He brings up that Caster Artoria can defend against Albion's Thermic Rays but he gives nothing on how STRONG those Thermic Rays are(thus those who don't bother will see it as a nothing rather than Divine Construct-levels of power she can block for a few minutes).
It's the same issue with the Rhongomyniads as the game straight up states Castoria only failed as the whole system was tuned for Morgan who is all but stated to have done the Pilgrimage more than once and benefited from ringing the bells multiple times to a massive degree... and the fact that Divine Constructs are picky wielders meaning she couldn't get the best from them anyway.
He also has for some reason a section of Fae Eyes for Humans... but includes Ector... whose a Faerie and alot of him trying to generalize the feats she did after each Bell is note-worthy, it also becomes kind of a mess which I'm certain some of the times she did certain feats isn't when she rang certain bells or wouldn't have mattered(As for instance, Castoria could always make a decent Bounded Field, she just fucked up the first time).
So it's not a bad Respect Thread but it's not a good one either.