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OBD Convo #58: We are the Heroes of Justice

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Guys, I need more watch time on this. The title and thumbnail are doing well but it's gonna get junked into obscurity if I don't get the average watch time up. Please help. This could be a hit if I just get the average watch time up by three more minutes. You don't even need to watch it all, just six or seven minutes. 🙏

 
NostalgiaFan said:
go for a darker interpretation of series that are more light hearted to make it feel more impactful to have them be changed so much and made so much darker and worse.
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Avoid doing this actually. The horror genre is filled with it and people are tapped out. It's especially egregious when its childhood/childrens characters. People have been trying to do evil mickey mouse/Poo Bear/bugs ect for the longest and at first the concept was interesting. Now its been overplayed so much people roll their eyes.
 
Uoruk said:
Avoid doing this actually. The horror genre is filled with it and people are tapped out. It's especially egregious when its childhood/childrens characters. People have been trying to do evil mickey mouse/Poo Bear/bugs ect for the longest and at first the concept was interesting. Now its been overplayed so much people roll their eyes.
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Every Disney character entering public domain summed up. And I agree that’s it’s generally shit when done.



Fuckers didn’t waste a second with Bambi now

:hestonpls
 
Derpmaster9000 said:
That just looks like the zombie deer from the beginning of the korean zombie movie. Train to Busan, I think. :mjlol
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It still manages to be an improvement visually over that Winnie The Pooh horror flick.

Like, it actually looks like a deer gone rabid over the obvious dudes in animal masks in that movie
 
Well LA Knight got his US title back, no idea what we do with him at Mania now. People were saying Jimmy Uso was gonna win the US title (so the two brothers could both celebrate with the confetti after Jey beats Gunther) but I don't see how that happens now with Babyface Knight having the title and Jimmy just taking a clean L to Drew Macintyre.

I don't want him to be a transitional champion but the best available mid-card heel for a feud would be Jacob Fatu and, if he gets that match, he's absolutely taking the title. Jacob vs Solo is good enough for a wrestlemania match and, in terms of a match where LA knight keeps the title, who the hell is there that he hasn't already beaten at this point?

As for Drew vs Priest. I'm really sad for both these guys that, after the 2024 they had, this is the best we can come up with and that NOBODY cares. I mean there is some story weight for this feud to happen and I like both guys so I'm fine with it, but they both quite frankly deserved better and aren't getting it 'cause Triple H fumbled Drew vs Bloodline and Priest vs Balor so fucking bad.



On the positive side of things, THIS was an amazing promo from Cody but we're gonna need to get Cena on-screen soon, either next week or the week after.
 


Yeah I'm still not buying that she did this alone Bianca. :maybe

This is all going a little too well for you to be by accident. Naomi attacks Jade, who comes back the night you're both in a Chamber match to determine who goes to Mania, you leave Naomi as a red herring to keep Jade's attention all the while assuring you don't face Rhea by distracting her when she's up against Iyo. I mean you're supposedly friends with both but you only cheered on Iyo and grinned like a fucking Cheshire cat when she won. :mjpls

Rhea turning heel would be pointless, nobody wants to boo her hence turning her babyface in the first place. This match needs a big twist and that would NOT be it. Bianca being the mastermind of the whole thing would be it. MAYBE I'm reading too much into it but leaving it at this with just Naomi being the culprit, which is the twist EVERYONE saw coming a mile away, would be boring.
 
Uoruk said:
Avoid doing this actually. The horror genre is filled with it and people are tapped out. It's especially egregious when its childhood/childrens characters. People have been trying to do evil mickey mouse/Poo Bear/bugs ect for the longest and at first the concept was interesting. Now its been overplayed so much people roll their eyes.
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The thing is that he said he is going for a horror story like " devil mario, sonic.exe, or ben drowned" which while Creepy Pasta instead of Analog, is not far off so that's why I recommend the things I did because if he is going for a seemingly innocent or light hearted series to write a twisted horror version of it, it would be better than writing it for a setting that's already horror-like as we see with Dark Souls and Halo. No shit overdoing that is annoying so I feel ya on that, but that's what the dude is asking for.

TBF Metroid is already dark and inspired by Alien so it's not too far off from being a horror setting, only being held back by the rating to not go full balls to the wall cosmic horror.
 
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Nevermind said:
Guys, I need more watch time on this. The title and thumbnail are doing well but it's gonna get junked into obscurity if I don't get the average watch time up. Please help. This could be a hit if I just get the average watch time up by three more minutes. You don't even need to watch it all, just six or seven minutes. 🙏

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Average watch time is increasing as YouTube is starting to test push this. Please watch it for like 10 minutes and a few comments would REALLY help right now.

This is the difference between it going to tens of thousands of views+ or languishing in obscurity.
 
NostalgiaFan said:
What is it about?
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The cat in the OP is a yokai/demon/whatever who didn't want to join the war against humanity. He got fucked up but the MC saved his life....and then got ganked himself. They merge, MC gets recruited into the supernatural government division, and then they fight the cats old enemy and his organization of yokai

It's pretty standard but the art and fights were good and the characters were likable.
 
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